Place and time workshop

I read over Catlin and Morice paper, Catlin wrote a short story that was located in a dance studio. She wrote a solid paper she just needs to fill it up and clear up transitions more. Once she adds her third event, more dialogue, and a bit more details shell be good to go. Morice also wrote a short story that was based in his hometown swimming pool, to which he was the lifeguard for. I believe the paper works nice as a short story he just needs to add some more events to meet the word count and look over grammatical errors.